Comments on: Book Outline – Chapter Headings

By: Marian Kerr

Marian Kerr — Tue, 25 Dec 2007 23:19:00 +0000

Hi David –
The content sounds great and I look forward to seeing how it develops. I realize it is just an outline, but there was some inconsistency in use of capitals, spaces between words/lines, etc. If you need proofing/copy editing assistance later on, I may be your gal

Below are some suggestions for slightly punchier headings:

Introduction
Chapter 1 Busting the 5 Myths that Hold You Back
Chapter 2 The True Value of Your Life Experience
Chapter 3 David’s 7 Steps to Online Success
Chapter 4 Step #1: Uncover Your True Niche
Chapter 5 Step #2: Set Up Your Web Site in Just 7 Days
Chapter 6 Choose Courage; Not Fear
Chapter 7 Step #3: The Hidden Foundation of Your Empire – Your Newsletter
Chapter 8 Step #4: Save 6 Months With this Short-cut to Product Creation!
Chapter 9 Your Key to Playing Big
Chapter 10 Step #5: Build Your Coaching or Consulting Revenue Stream
Chapter 11 Step #6: Drive Massive Traffic to Your Site
Chapter 12 Step #7: Create Your Own Product in Only 14 days
Bonus Chapter How to Build a Massive Email List
Conclusion: Getting Paid for Who You Are

By: David Wood

David Wood — Fri, 21 Dec 2007 01:31:00 +0000

thanks guys! Great ideas.

By: www.thefamilyisPARAMOUNT.com

www.thefamilyisPARAMOUNT.com — Fri, 21 Dec 2007 01:17:00 +0000

WONDERFUL, David:
I so appreciate you sharing this with us - the process and the info. I'm in Alex Mandossian's class right now, and I felt you were speaking directly to me, reiterating things he's said, and adding new ideas.

Here's an idea about breaking the book into sections (use what works, discard what doesn't):

DIGGING/PREPARING THE GROUND (Mining the Gems): Chs 1,2,6

POURING THE FOUNDATION (Developing the Business): Chs 4,5,7,8

BUILDING YOUR EMPIRE (Blasting Off): Chs 9, 10, 11, 12

Some kind of imagery, not necessarily mine, might be nice.

It's GOLD already, I'm looking forward to reading it and learning more,
Venus in Boston
www.thelifeicrave.com

By: David Wolf

David Wolf — Fri, 21 Dec 2007 01:14:00 +0000

Hi David,

Thank you for the call. About the table of content it took me some time to realize that the 7 steps where in the chapters. It seems that you may want to consider having the 7 steps as a sub-head of chapter 4 and having only 4 chapters. Here is the way it could look

Introduction
Chapter 1--Is it truly possible? Busting the 5 Myths
Chapter 2--Your Life Experience is Valuable
Chapter 3--Choose Courage, not Fear
Chapter 4--The ‘David 7 Step’ – an overview
--Step #1: How to Uncover Your True Niche
--Step #2: How to Set Up Your Web Site in 7 Days
--Step #3: The Foundation of Your Empire - Your Newsletter
--Step #4: A Short Cut to Product Creation – save 6 months!
--Step #5: Build Your Coaching or Consulting Revenue Stream
--Step #6: How to Drive Massive Traffic to Your Site
--Step #7: How to Create Your Own Product in 14 days
Chapter 5--Your Key to Playing Big
Bonus Chapter--How to Build a Massive Email List
Conclusion: Getting Paid for Who You Are

By: Anonymous

Anonymous — Fri, 21 Dec 2007 01:11:00 +0000

Just wondering David, if you should have something upfront about affordability? It is often a big obstacle for many.